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can u plzzzz make this sound better?

Nohomo is a coastal city and major seaport, located near Vancouver in British Colombia, Canada . Being a coastal city, it has many desirable and a few undesirable factors. Nohomo is an ideal city for those people who love warm Summer days because of its average warm temperature that stays stable throughout the year with rain in winter and warm summers. The city boasts many remarkable beaches with beautiful white sand and gorgeous views of the sunset. its not supposed to exist...lol

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1. Ha that's really good, but put a comma between year and with in the 2nd to last sentence. EDIT: Wait, I just looked that place up and it doesn't seem to exist...
2. Since it is a coastal City, and because of it's major seaport, Nohomo; located near Vancouver, British Colombia has many desirable factors. The city is perfect for those who enjoy spending their time outdoors, in a warm and relaxing atmosphere. The temperature stays stable throughout the year with little more then rain in the winter, and quite pleasant summers. The City's many popular beaches are complimented by their white sand and breathtaking sunsets.